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托福独立写作论据的高分技巧

时间:2021-05-08 18:38来源:江苏朗阁外语培训中心 作者:jasmine

  托福独立写作部分,论据内容也是重要的素材积累。大家在平时的复习中,可以侧重积累一些高分的口语论据,以便我们可以更全面的提高写作水平。具体的这些论据内容都有哪些?下面小编为大家整理了详细的内容,供大家参考!

  托福写作论据可以从两个角度:个人和社会

  个人角度: 个人的身体和心理的健康,个人的动机,梦想,兴趣爱好,职业和学业,家庭背景,个人生活方式以及个人的能力。

  社会角度:政府税收,教育,民族文化,经济,能源环境以及社会秩序。

  例题一:

  Government should be responsible for the tuition fee of university students. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  同意的论据选择:

  个人:

  For those students who are with great intelligence but from poor families, government surely should be responsible for their tuition fee and provide them opportunities to go to school and then release pressure for their families.

  社会:

  As we all know, economy is a master key to a country's development and it is undeniable that students who finish their education are the main force pushing forward social and economic development, for which government should encourage education for the benefits of the whole society.

  不同意的论据选择:

  个人:

  Paying tuition fee for university students can make them access to education easier, therefore, some students may lose motivation without financial pressure and will not cherish the studying opportunities. As a consequence, it is hard to guarantee the quality of university education.

  社会:

  Due to the limited financial budget, government is likely to suffer a great pressure if spending too much money on education;

  as a result, our government will not have extra energy to develop in other fields, such as science and technology, as well as the medical advances, which are also with great significance to society.

  托福独立写作

  例题二:

  Machines can do a lot of work for human being, it can bring many benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

  同意的论据选择:

  个人:

  More work can be done in a relatively shorter time, which can greatly increase the working efficiency and improve quality of life by reducing the working tense;

  the benefits of this trend also can ensure safety of employees as some work with great danger can rely on machines

  社会:

  The economic development speeds up due to the improvement of productivity by using machines, which never feel tired and are not dependent external factors, such as emotion and weather.

  不同意的论据选择:

  个人:

  Relying on machines too much may lead to lack of exercise and then cause human's healthy problems.

  社会:

  Some handicraft skills cannot be passed on and the traditional culture may die out since the skilled workers have been replaced by machines.

  Moreover, it is usually more resource consuming and causes environmental problems by using machines in the mass production.


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