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2022年1月14日:雅思写作题目回顾

时间:2023-01-30 17:45来源:江苏朗阁外语培训中心 作者:jasmine

  小作文: 线图

  大作文: Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison.what do you think is the cause? How can it be solved?(报告类)

  朗阁讲师点评

  1.本次考试 难度中等。

  2.整体分析:

  Task 1:英国钢铁的需求以及钢铁厂的employer数据,线图(动态图)。

  注意:1.主要数据的挑选,相关信息的横向和纵向对比。2. 注意正文段表述数据时态的选择;3.词汇和句式结构,多样性。

  相关动态数据表达:

  There was an upward trend in ... from ... to...

  ...had experienced an increase from ... to...

  Despite some ups and downs, ... was on a rise from ... to ... .

  ... grew from ... to ..., followed by a decline to ...

  Task 2 :犯罪类

  题目翻译:一些刑满释放的罪犯在出狱后再次犯罪。什么原因导致的?怎么解决?(报告类话题)

  是一个比较常考的话题,这里提供一些思路:

  Why:

  对于犯罪者的惩罚不够(the sanctions against criminals are not harsh enough).转而言之,惩罚没有让罪犯改变他们自己(does not make a huge difference to offenders),也没让他们意识到自己的行为会对这个社会产生的严重结果(these people are normally unable to realize the detrimental consequences that breaching the law will entail for victims and society). 从监狱回来的罪犯可能不能完全被社会所接受(former convicts are not completely accepted in society)。公司可能会拒绝雇佣他们,他们的家人和朋友可能也不会完全原谅他们(employers refuse to recruit them and their family and friends may not embrace them).

  Solution:

  更加严厉的惩罚可能是一个有效的方法,比如更长的监禁或者社区服务(a longer jail sentence or stint of community).给予有前科的犯罪者提供职业培训和就业机会也是一个很好的解决方法(providing more vocational training sessions and job opportunities for those with criminal records is another feasible solution).

  考试建议

  1.小作文:重点关注表格、地图

  2.大作文:重点关注媒体、政府话题。

  3.重点浏览2021年写作机经,可借助《**范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。



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