2016年6月4日托福考试写作回顾

2016年6月4日托福考试写作回顾

综合写作：

金字塔内部竖井（shafts）的作用

独立写作：

The most important thing that the government should do to improve the health care is to clean the environment.

朗阁讲师张璐点评

综合写作：

阅读：提出三个理论

1. 让外面的新鲜空气进入，工人在里面很难呼吸。

2.是和一些星星的方位一致。

3. 让法老的灵魂（spirit）进入。

听力反驳：

1.    有的结构没有延伸到外面

2. 早期的星星和神灵并没有联系。

3. 法老的灵魂可以从墙上穿过，不需要通道（passageways）。

独立写作：

题型：绝对词  话题：政府类 解题方法：提出另外2~3种更好的解决方式

背景句：With the development of society, an increasing number of people are beginning to realize the importance of health care. 两种不同观点比较：When it comes to whether the government should clean the environment first in order to improve health care, some people assert that cleaning the environment is definitely the priority task that should be done. However, some people seem to hold the opposite idea. 表明立场：Despite many diverse opinions aired（发表意见）by different people based on their feeling of this matter, there can be no doubt that cleaning the environment is not the most effective way under the aegis（支持）of popular belief.

1. 主题句：First of all, the government should pay more attention to ameliorate（改善） the poverty issue（贫困问题） in our country.解 释句/对比论证：Although a clean environment is an important condition of health care, there are however more and more people who do not have sufficient food in our society, which means those poor people do not take in enough nutrition（没有足够的成长）. Therefore, they may not grow well and become sick easily.结束句：That's why I am convinced that improving the poverty issue should be given more consideration by the government.

2. 主题句：In addition, the government should take health-care education into account（考虑卫生保健教育）.解 释句：The reason being, that teaching the public how to stave off viruses is also as significant as the clean environment problem. Since each disease has its unique feature, people have to learn how to quickly identify those diseases.举例论证：For example, AIDS is a common disease around the world, and this kind of virus has no connection with environment. Therefore, the government should educate the public that the best way to avoid this disease is to have safe sex. 结束句：There is no gainsaying （不可否认的是）that the government have to take health-care education far more seriously than helping clean the environment.

3. With the reasons above, I hold that the clean environment issues should not be put in the limelight（不应该备受瞩目）. That is not to say of course that other points of view are completely without merit. 重申立场：However, I think the reasons which I have provided in favor of my viewpoint are much stronger.

考试预测

1.    多注意教育类话题与生活类话题

2.    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? it is better to finish a project completely then to do another job than to do two or more projects at the same time.

3.    Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better to spend money on travelling and vacation than save money for the future.