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2017年5月20日雅思考试写作回顾

发布时间:2017-05-24 11:04:52 来源:南京朗阁外语培训中心 编辑:朗阁小编
2017年5月20日雅思考试写作回顾小作文:The graph shows the percentage of workers in 5 different European countries with

2017520雅思考试写作回顾

 

小作文:The graph shows the percentage of workers in 5 different European countries with five days or more illness absence from 1991 to 2001.  

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大作文:The government should control the violent films and television in order to decrease the crimes in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

朗阁名师张姝姝点评:

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1.本次考试难度中等

2.整体分析

Task 1:线图。

注意:1.采用一般过去时描写;2. 注意描写数值变化: 如上升、下降、保持不变等;3. 注意描写重要数据:如起点、相等、最高点、终点等。4. 注意描写各国间数据比较。

 

相关表达:

1、stand at the same level 

2、bottom out at

3、witness a gradual decline

4、experience an opposite trend

5、show a similar pattern ; remain steady/stable

 

3.Task 2媒体/犯罪类

题目翻译:为了减少犯罪,政府应该控制暴力电视和电影节目。你多大程度上同意不同意?

 

Introduction:

Psychologists and educators claim that the increase in the violent content on TV or films is intimately bound up with the rising crime rate seen in many countries. (心理学家和教育学家指出电视和电影的暴力内容与持续升高的犯罪率紧密相关) It is suggested that the authorities should control the releasing of these programs. Personally….(政府应该控制这些媒体内容的发布,我个人认为…)

 

 

Body 1:

让步段:

     It is true that violent content on TV and films would help the operators expand the audiences and earn more profit through the increasing sales of advertisement or tickets sold. (诚然,电视和电影的暴力内容能吸引更多观众,同时也能帮助运营者增加收入)

 

Body 2:

However, many studies of the effects of media violence on young people have found that children and teenagers with impressionable minds may imitate the violence they observe on television or films for excitement and fun. 

     (很多关于媒体暴力的研究表明,孩子和青少年会追求刺激模仿在电视或者电影中看到的暴力细节)

 

Body 3:

Extensive viewing of media violence has an adverse impact on mental health of people of different age groups and causes greater aggressiveness among children and teenagers in particular. (过多观看媒体暴力对于各年龄阶段的人们心理健康都有负面影响,尤其会导致儿童和青少年的攻击性的行为)

 

Conclusion

In conclusion, it has been proven that television and films can be a powerful influence in developing value systems and shaping behavior. Therefore, it is advisable that government should censor and regulate the violent programs on TV and films if not banning them all. (总的来说,电视和电影对于价值观和行为形成有着重要影响。所以政府应该审查和规范媒体暴力内容,若不全部禁止的话。)

 

考试预测:

1.小作文:重点关注表格、饼图、柱状图

2.大作文:重点关住教育、科技、文化话题。

3.重点浏览14年写作机经,可借助《高分范文书》第7版经典旧题来复习。

 

 


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