2017年6月3日雅思考试写作回顾

2017年6月3日雅思考试写作回顾

小作文：The charts show the reasons why undergraduates and postgraduates choose to go to Parker University. Describe the difference and compare them if possible.  

大作文：Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

朗阁名师点评：

1.本次考试难度偏低。

2.整体分析：

Task 1：饼图（静态）

注意：1.采用一般现在时描写；

      2. 介绍各扇面及总体的关系；

      3. 各个扇面之间的比较， 各类扇面在不同时间， 不同地点的比较；

      4. 重点突出特点最明显的扇面：最大的，最小的，互相成倍的。

相关表达：

 常用词：

1）名词：percentage 百分比，proportion 份额

2）动词：占：comprise, make up, constitute, account for, take up, consume 占（份额）, occupy, compose, is divided into...parts 分为...部分，consist of / be comprised of 由...构成，consume the larges / smallest portion 占最大/最小的份额；与...相比较 compare / comparison / by contrast / in sharp contrast to; 比...多 outnumber / exceed

3）短语及副词：与...相反on the contrary; 几分之几 one half / one third / one fifth / two thirds / two fifths； 大约、大概 about / around / almost / nearly / roughly / approximately; 分别/各自 respectively; 与...相比 compared with, compared to, in comparison with, in comparison to, by comparison with, by comparison to

     常用套句：

     1）the graph, presented in pie chart, shows the general trend in...

     2) the pie graph depicts (mat)...

     3) the biggest difference between the two groups (A+B) is in..., where A makes

     up 5% while B constitutes 67%.

     4) the highest percentage is A, which was approximately 12%...

     5) the percentage of A in ... is more than twice that of B. The ratio is ...% to ...%.

     6) a greater percentage of A than B is found in ... ( the former is ...% and the

     latter is ...%)

     7) there are more A in ..., reaching ...%, compared with ...% of B.

     8) A, which used to be the ..., has become less important, which declined

     (increased) sharply from ...% in 1978 to only ...% in 1998.

     9) the percentage of A is slightly larger / smaller than that of B.

     10) the highest / greatest / lowest / smallest / percentage / proportion of... is...

3.Task 2生活/社会类

题目翻译：一些人认为住在大城市对人们的身体健康不利。在多大程度上，你同意还

  是不同意。

Introduction:

   越来越多怀有理想和抱负的人，向往住在时尚大都市里。比如英国伦敦，中国上海，

   都吸引数以百万的人在这里定居。有些人，就开始担心生活在大都市，会对人们的

   健康产生威胁。 我也同意这些人的看法。

   Increasing numbers of people holding dreams and ambitions all yearn for living in  

   modern metropolises such as London of Britain, Shanghai of China where

   continue attracting millions of people to settle down. However, someone is worried

   about living in the big cities is harmful to settlers’ health. I agree with them in

   general.

Body 1: （让步段）

   不可否认，在大都市生活，有很多的发展机会，对于有志向的青年人有更多成功的

   可能。

   Undoubtedly, more chances of development, for young adults who have         

   aspiration, are available in metropolises and make it possible for those

   dreamers to receive success.

Body 2: 大都市的污染对人的身体健康造成巨大危害。

   虽然，在大都市，我承认有很多发展机会。然而，健康是成功的基本要素，没有

   健康的身体，其他都是虚无。大城市污染严重，各种车辆，建筑项目，工厂排污，

   人类各项活动，都是都市的污染源。不论是什么污染，都会对人的身体健康产生

   巨大的危害，噪音污染让人无法好好休息，空气污染让人们患病，甚至绝症。

   Although, I admit that there are many chances to develop for young adults in

   Metropolises. In fact, health is a basic and vital element. To put another way,

   Nothing is valuable without health. As we know, pollution in metropolises is very

   serious caused by various vehicles, construction projects, drain contamination  

   from factories and people’s activities. Whatever the forms of pollution are, they  

   always pose threat to people’s health. Noise disturb our rest and air pollution

   induces diseases even cancer.

Body 3: 大都市激烈的竞争压力，会威胁身体健康。

   大城市机会多，就意味着竞争也异常激烈。整天处在如此激烈竞争的工作压力下，

   难免都会有心情郁闷或者生气的时候，科学家已经证实，很多身体的疾病都是由

   心理状况造成的。

   More chances in metropolises mean abnormal fierce competition. Suffering  

   such competitive stress for a long time, nobody can avoid depression or anger,  

   as scientists have confirmed that quite lots of diseases are the results of terrible

   mental conditions.

Conclusion：

   正如前言，我认为在大城市生活对我们的身体健康不利。

   As what I have said above, living in big cities is unbenefited.

考试预测：

1.小作文：重点关注表格、饼图、流程图。

2.大作文：重点关住教育、工作、政府投资、科技、文化话题。

3.重点浏览14年写作机经，可借助《高分范文书》第7版经典旧题来复习。