南京朗阁11月11日雅思考试写作回顾

　　南京朗阁11月11日雅思考试写作回顾

　　小作文：柱图

　　大作文：Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Is it positive or negative development?

　　南京朗阁名师汪菁点评：

　　1.本次考试难度较小。大作文用了2014年11月考过的旧题，应景双十一，考生们的福利。

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1：柱图

　　注意：1. 注意横坐标及纵坐标所代表的内容以及时间跨度2. 动态图注意描述和对比趋势，一般来说图表所描绘的变化没有起点和终点，仅仅包含与变化程度相关的数值;3. 注意时态，看清时间点;4. 数据图需要在结尾段总结数据的总体特征(overview)

　　相关表达：

　　1. Shifted between…and…

　　2. Rose dramatically by nearly…

　　3. Falling approximately ….

　　4. 上升grow, climb, soar, increase, rise, boom

　　5. 下降 drop, fall, sink, dip, decrease, decline, slump, reduce

　　6. 相同 be similar to; be comparable with; be matched with

　　7. 更小 smaller, minor, less or fewer

　　8. 更大 bigger, larger, better

　　9. 程度 dramatically, significantly, progressively, gradually, sharply; hugely; enormously; steeply; substantially, considerably, slightly, slowly, moderately, minimally

　　Task 2 科技类、社会类话题

　　题目翻译：网购正在替代实体店购物，它是积极发展还是消极发展?

　　从话题上来说，这属于科技类、社会类话题，论证需要适当展开。

　　从类型上来说，陈述网购代替实体店购物是积极发展还是消极发展这个话题，应注意正反辩论。描述网购给我们生活中所带来的便利以及网购的普遍性，同时也应当分析网购带来的弊端。

　　从结构上来说，可以通过四段完成写作任务：

　　开头段：题目改写+整体背景介绍

　　议论段1：陈述网购的好处：对于厂家的好处以及对于消费者的好处

　　议论段2：陈述网购的弊端：买到假货、身份泄露及非理性消费

　　结尾段：总结给出个人观点，网购是未来的大趋势，网络安全须得到改善。

　　Introduction:

　　Online shopping is becoming increasingly popular among consumers of various age groups, with the total sales soaring every year. It brings benefits to both sellers and buyers, although there are some concerns about this pattern.

　　网购在各个年龄段的消费者中越来越流行，每年的销售额都在飙升。它对于卖家和买家都有好处，尽管也有人担忧这种模式。

　　Body 1:

　　For sellers, doing business online means a much wider market and their products can reach everywhere in the world. This is beneficial to buyers as well. With home-delivery service, they can stay at home and buy whatever they need, saving a great deal of time and energy. In addition, online shopping makes it easier for consumers to compare the price of the goods and find bargains, without going from one store to another, as they used to do before. The competition between sellers would motivate them to improve the quality of their products and services, which conforms to the interests of consumers.

　　对于卖家来说，在网上做生意意味着一个更广阔的市场，他们的产品也可以遍布世界各地。这对买家也是有利的。家庭送货服务使他们可以足不出户就买到他们需要的任何东西，节省了大量的时间和精力。此外，网上购物使消费者更容易比较商品的价格，找到便宜的货品，而不必像从前那样从一个商店到另一个商店奔波。卖家之间的激烈竞争激励他们提高产品和服务的质量，这很符合消费者的利益。

　　Body 2:

　　However, online shopping may expose consumers to risks. The first concern is the possibility of buying fake goods, as the transaction is done in the virtual space. Also, the loopholes on the web may lead to disclosure of personal information or even theft of identity. Another problem is irrational consumption. Shopping can be done at any time of the day or night, with various kinds of goods from all over the world available on the computer. Consumers may find it difficult to resist the temptation and end up in buying more things than they really need.

　　然而，网上购物可能会暴露消费者的风险。第一个问题是买到假货的可能性，因为交易是在虚拟空间完成的。此外，网络上的漏洞可能会导致个人信息泄露甚至身份被窃取。另一个问题是非理性消费，购物可以在白天或晚上的任意时间进行，可以通过计算机操作买到世界各地的各种商品。消费者可能会难以抵制诱惑，最终购买更多的不被真正需要的东西。

　　Conclusion:

　　To sum up, online shopping is expected to grow rapidly and continuously, as it represents the selling-buying trend in the future. If the cyber security could be improved, people would be more satisfied with the experience of shopping on the web.

　　总体来说，网上购物预计会快速而持续地增长，因为它代表了未来的销售购买趋势。如果网络安全能得到改善，人们会更满意在网上购物的体验。

　　南京朗阁名师汪菁考试预测：

　　1.小作文：重点关注柱图和曲线图。

　　2.大作文：重点关注教育类、社会类、科技类话题。

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