南京朗阁11月25日雅思考试写作回顾

　　南京朗阁11月25日雅思考试写作回顾

　　小作文：流程图(有机垃圾生产花园化肥的过程)

　　大作文：With major cities continue growing, are there any problems to young people? How to solve these problems?

　　南京朗阁名师汪菁点评：

　　本次考试难度较大。

　　整体分析：

　　Task 1：流程图(2007年2月A类旧题)

　　注意：本次流程图当中，同时出现了五张小图，“前一幅图”的产物是“后一幅图”的原料。一般来说，在一道题目当中出现两张或多张图，它们之间或多或少会存在某种联系，这就需要考生能够识别这些关系，并将其体现在文章中的概括总结部分。

　　本次小作文重点词汇：

　　1. Organic 有机的，器官的，组织的

　　2. Pile up 堆积，积累

　　3. Shred 撕碎，切碎

　　4. Pour 灌注，倾泻，涌入

　　5. Continuously 连续地，持续地

　　6. Fermentation 发酵

　　7. Convert 使转变，转换

　　流程图中常用的起承转折词汇：

　　1. to begin with

　　2. first of all / firstly

　　3. secondly

　　4. then

　　5. next

　　6. after that

　　7. finally

　　8. in addition

　　9. furthermore

　　10. meanwhile

　　11. at the same time

　　Task 2社会发展类话题(2014年9月6日旧题)

　　题目翻译：随着世界各大城市的快速发展，年轻人面临哪些问题?有哪些解决方案?

　　从话题上来说，这属于社会发展类话题，论证需要适当展开。

　　从结构上来说，可以通过四段完成写作任务：

　　开头段：年轻人面对的成长问题之一是就业难，谈及其对应个人和社会的不良影响，再表达本文的写作目的。

　　议论段1：问题原因展开

　　议论段2：问题解决方案

　　总结段：亮明立场，强调协同努力才能解决问题

　　Introduction:

　　Alarmingly, it is far from easy for college graduates to secure ideal jobs and countless college job candidates feel frustrated when seeking for a reasonable career. The crisis of the youth employment has been exerting a baneful influence on those gifted college leavers and the harmony of the community. This essay aims to explore the possible reasons of youth unemployment and then present my personal recommendations.

　　解析：

　　1. Alarmingly, it is far from easy for sb to do sth 令人担忧的是，某人做……很难

　　2. get a reasonable career 找到理想的工作

　　3. …… has been exerting a baneful influence on …… and the harmony of the community …… 一直对于……和社会的和谐造成不良影响

　　4. gifted college leavers 有才化的大学毕业生

　　5. This essay aims to explore the possible reasons of …… and then present my personal recommendations. 本文将会探究下…… 的原因，再提出个人的建议。

　　Body1:

　　Virtually, a number of factors explain the hardship of college graduates’ employment. First, the pressure of youth unemployment could be owed to the fact that the supply of college graduates far outweighs the demand of the society. Specifically, countless university job-seekers are competing for limited positions. Further, some enterprises suffering from economic downturn are reducing staff and cutting down the plans of recruiting new employees. Meanwhile, the demand of some corporations for job candidates grows continuously, eye-dazzling academic qualification or rich working experience could all serve as excellent examples. Eventually, the incompetence of some college job-hunters and improper career concepts account for the truth that jobs are challenging to get.

　　年轻人择业难的三个原因：(从客观原因谈及主观原因)

　　1. 大学生求职者供过于求，很多的大学生求职者在竞争有限的工作岗位。

　　2. 一些经济低迷的企业在裁员，减少员工招募，同时，企业对于年轻求职者的要求不断提高，例如要求高学历以及丰富的工作经验。

　　3. 一些年轻人本身能力不强，心态不健康解释了为何工作难寻。

　　解析：

　　1. virtually, a number of factors explain …… 实际上，很多原因解释 ……

　　2. first, …… could be owed to the fact that …… ，第一, …… 可以被归结为……

　　3. some enterprises suffering from economic downturn 一些遭遇经济低迷的企业

　　4. reduce staff 裁员

　　5. cut down the plans of recruiting new employees 减少了招募新员工的计划

　　6. the demand of …… grows continuously …… 的要求不断增加

　　7. eye-dazzling academic qualification 惹眼的学历

　　8. rich working experience 丰富的工作经验

　　9. …… could all serve as excellent examples …… 可以被当做是完美的例证

　　10. …… account for the truth that …… …… 解释了……的事实

　　Body 2:

　　Considering the severity of youth unemployment it is time that we adopted some effective measures. First, it is imperative for the government to enact relevant legislations to balance the supply and the demand of the college students. Meanwhile, the government is urged to provide college leavers with preferential policies so that those ambitious college job-hunters could carve out their own careers. Further, efforts should be made by relevant enterprises, they should create more on-the-job training chances for youngsters and properly lower criteria in selecting college job-seekers. Ultimately, undergraduates ought to study even harder and adjust their mentality in terms of career choice. More precisely, every college student should excel academically and strive from the bottom of the society.

　　论证年轻人择业难的解决策略:

　　1. 政府立法，平衡大学生的供求，政府给有梦想创业的年轻人提供优惠的政策。

　　2. 企业应该给年轻人提供在职工作培训的机会，同时，企业应该降低对于大学生求职者的要求。

　　3. 大学生应该个人努力，精通专业知识，调整就业心态，从底层奋斗。

　　解析：

　　1. Considering the severity of …… it is high time that we adopted some effective measures 考虑……的严重性，是我们采取有效措施来解决问题的时候了。

　　2. it is imperative for the government to enact relevant legislations to …… 政府颁布相关立法去……是势在必行的。

　　3. the government is urged to provide college leavers with preferential policies 政府应该给大学毕业生提供优惠的政策。

　　4. carve out their own careers 自我创业

　　5. efforts should be made by …… 努力应该有……做出

　　6. create more on-the-job training chances 创造更多的在职培训的机会

　　7. properly lower criteria in …… 在……方面降低标准

　　8. study even harder 努力学习

　　9. adjust their mentality in terms of career choice 调整择业心态

　　10. excel academically and strive from the bottom of the society 精通专业知识以及从社会底层奋斗

　　Conclusion:

　　In a nutshell, it is no easy task to help every young job-hunter to secure an ideal job. Concerted efforts should be made by the government, the relevant companies and every college job-seeker. Only in this way can crisis of youth unemployment be tackled properly.

　　强调年轻人择业难要求三方共同努力：政府、企业、个人。

　　解析：

　　1. in a nutshell, it is no easy task to …… 总之，做 …… 绝非易事

　　2. secure an ideal job 找到理想的工作

　　3. concerted efforts should be made by …… , …… , and …… 三方应该共同努力去 ……

　　4. only in this way can …… be tackled properly 只有以这样的方式，…… 才能被恰当解决

　　南京朗阁名师汪菁考试预测：

　　1.小作文：重点关注曲线图和流程图。

　　2.大作文：重点关注环境类、社会类、科技类话题。

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