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2017年12月17日托福考试写作回顾

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2017年12月17日托福考试写作回顾综合写作:讨论explorer Drake是否航行到English Columbia。独立写作:If your friend want to redu

2017年12月17日托福考试写作回顾

综合写作:

讨论explorer Drake是否航行到English Columbia。

独立写作:

If your friend want to reduce living expenses, which would you suggest?
1. Find a roommate that can share the living expenses. 
2. Buy the new technology products less frequently.
3. Shop for less expensive food and cooking at home. ​​​​

朗阁讲师林森点评

综合写作:

阅读:持肯定观点

1.       Drake的日记中记载过自己遭遇过极端天气,而这种天气不太可能出现在加州;
 

2.       Drake在后来的报道中写到的wooden pole可能是当地人的一种叫Totem的东西;

3.       只有英国政府知道Drake的航行,因为当时英国在和西班牙争夺领土,所以没有公布。

听力:不认同

1.  有证据表明加州可能也有过那样的天气,因为科学家研究了树的growth ring,发现更加narrow,从而证明当时的天气不好;
 

2.  通常Totem pole都是beautiful carved,上面记载着story, animals,legends等,但Drake的报道并没有提到这些;

3.  如果英国政府为了保密随后去占领,那么他们一定很快会派settlers去,但事实上两百多年英国都没有派人去过。

 

独立写作:

本题是三选一的新题型,并且三个选项之间无法紧密比较,以下是笔者给出的一个参考答案:

Position: I have the preference that finding a roommate that can share the living expenses is a better idea.

Reason 1: First of all, it is obvious that living expenses represents the majority of all expenses, which could be an enormous burden for young people. (租房成本占据了大部分的支出成本,对年轻人来说是一种巨大的负担。) In addition, the money, which is saved from renting a house with a roommate, could be better used as tuition for advanced degree, expenses for outbound tourism,or something more useful and beneficial.(通过和室友分担节省下的钱能用在更有用的方面,譬如作为学费或者出国旅游的开销等。)

Reason 2: Second, the benefits brought by a roommate would go far beyond sharing the living expenses. Virtually, a roommate, with a wild range of knowledge and experience, could play a vital role in helping and guiding you in various kinds of fields, which is a precious treasure. (室友带给我们的益处不仅仅是分担房租,更可能会在生活中的各个方面都能给我们带来帮助。)

Reason 3: Buying the new technology products less frequently cannot get to the root of the problem, since the expense for buying new techanology products cannot compete with that for renting a house.  What's more, it is not always realistic for young people to shop for less expensive food and cooking at home.(减少购买新科技产品并不能解决问题,因为这一项支出并没有租房成本那么大,而且对于年轻人来说在家做饭也不一定总是那么现实。)

考试预测

本题是近年来较火热的三选一题型,希望同学们在备考过程中予以重视。

1.       Which one is the most important for teacher of high school?

    1. The ability to help students plan for their future;

    2. The ability to find the students who need help most and help them;

    3. Teach students how to learn outside the classroom.

2.       Which way do you think is the best for a student to make friends?

    Join a sports team, participate in community activities or travel.

 


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